The form and shape of your building is very interesting. I would really like to know how this came from the easy sketches, what created the circular form, what benefit you see to placing the bike storage up a ramp, and if there is anything under the raised bike storage. Overall, the physical manifestation of the ideas is interesting, however we are left wondering what is going on in the space because you have not explained it. In person, you would have had the opportunity to describe each component of the design and discuss its importance in the project, as well as where it came from. I would also like to see more of the multitude of ideas that you had - the ones the you kept and the ones that you threw away. Design is iterative, meaning that you have an idea, test it, refine it, test it, refine it, test it, etc. until you have a solution that meets all of the needs in a way that is elegant. I see some great development of ideas, but would love to have read more about what ideas are here, and how they changed and developed from the beginning.
Nice project - keep up the good work, and share your great ideas so that we can be as excited as you are!